Thursday, April 5, 2012

Welcome


Welcome to my inconsistent personality.
Welcome to my chaotic compositions.
Welcome to my perverse sentiments.
Welcome to my literary haven.
Welcome to the tale of my demise.

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  1. So this is a really interesting and simple piece. It would be great for an about me on a blog of sorts. My only suggestion is to drop the "twisted mind." It's a cliche and unoriginal image and I'm sure you can find a more creative way to describe that image that your reader hasn't head before.

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    1. Yeah I see what you mean. I just edited it, do you think this new line/phrase is better?

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  2. Yeah much better. Like it alot.

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