So this is a really interesting and simple piece. It would be great for an about me on a blog of sorts. My only suggestion is to drop the "twisted mind." It's a cliche and unoriginal image and I'm sure you can find a more creative way to describe that image that your reader hasn't head before.
Yeah I see what you mean. I just edited it, do you think this new line/phrase is better?
Yeah much better. Like it alot.